I went to the mall over break with my family. There were a lot of new rides. I think that if if they are going to keep
adding rides they are going to have to make the park bigger. Why I think this is because they want to make it better and still add keep old rides and add new ones.
I like all the rides they are cool but they don't need to add more. We have a lot so lets just appreciate what we have. If they add more they will have to start taking over stores so lets just keep what we have and live with it.
Since I used to work there, I have a hard time imagining new rides being added! How are you going to turn this into a fiction story? -Ms. Schwieters
I could by greedy people trying to make it the best but other people argue against this. Might turn out bad... very bad...
I wish there were more books about:
action horror
adventure
camping
books with a lot of action
rich become poor for a day and poor become rich
I wonder how your last idea would turn out? Would it hange peole's minds about different beliefs? -Ms. Schwieters
5-6-10
1. stage freight Characters:
Adam
Parker
2.
Expand on this... why are they afraid to be on stage? What do they need to be on stage for? SO many
questions.-Ms. Schwieters
they all have to present a speech on stage.
5-7-10
Spooky woods
7 people
5 paths
3 haunted places
and only 1 way out
This is great! It sounds like a movie trailer script or a great back of the book summary to get someone to read this
story! Keep going!!-Ms. Schwieters
Internal:
shyer
active but sensitive to cuts
takes risks
likes to bike ride
does sports
plays a lot
very active
controlling
does not have many friends
good personality External: blue eyes
taller
always where's jean's (sometimes wheres shorts)
Love that your list of internal characteristics is longer than your external! Can't wait to see what happens.-Ms. Schwieters
My character wants a trick bike or a soccer net (his brother gets all the cool stuff)
He yearns for a skateboard park or soccer field
CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT
Shy because he doesn't have friends because he's shy
loves sports
cooperative
active
interested in mathematics
age 10
I went to the mall over break with my family. There were a lot of new rides. I think that if if they are going to keep
adding rides they are going to have to make the park bigger. Why I think this is because they want to make it better and still add keep old rides and add new ones.
I like all the rides they are cool but they don't need to add more. We have a lot so lets just appreciate what we have. If they add more they will have to start taking over stores so lets just keep what we have and live with it.
Since I used to work there, I have a hard time imagining new rides being added! How are you going to turn this into a fiction story? -Ms. Schwieters
I could by greedy people trying to make it the best but other people argue against this. Might turn out bad... very bad...
I wish there were more books about:
action horror
adventure
camping
books with a lot of action
rich become poor for a day and poor become rich
I wonder how your last idea would turn out? Would it hange peole's minds about different beliefs? -Ms. Schwieters
5-6-10
1. stage freight Characters:
Adam
Parker
2.
Expand on this... why are they afraid to be on stage? What do they need to be on stage for? SO many
questions.-Ms. Schwieters
they all have to present a speech on stage.
5-7-10
Spooky woods
- 7 people
- 5 paths
- 3 haunted places
- and only 1 way out
This is great! It sounds like a movie trailer script or a great back of the book summary to get someone to read thisstory! Keep going!!-Ms. Schwieters
Internal:
shyer
active but sensitive to cuts
takes risks
likes to bike ride
does sports
plays a lot
very active
controlling
does not have many friends
good personality
External: blue eyes
taller
always where's jean's (sometimes wheres shorts)
Love that your list of internal characteristics is longer than your external! Can't wait to see what happens.-Ms. Schwieters
My character wants a trick bike or a soccer net (his brother gets all the cool stuff)
He yearns for a skateboard park or soccer field
CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT
Shy because he doesn't have friends because he's shy
loves sports
cooperative
active
interested in mathematics
age 10